User talk:Jfwash12

Undue weight/neutral point of view problems
Hello. I noticed at Youth suicide you've added tons of information about Canadian Aboriginals. That lends undue weight to that segment of the global youth population unless they are (by far) the most extensively studied group as it relates to the subject. Perhaps the article should be split into a new article such as Youth suicide among Canadian Aboriginals or Youth suicide among indigenous populations. Also, we never write things like "Sadly, the Indigenous population in Canada face increased rates of health disparities that vary significantly from the rest of the general population." That represents a clear NPOV (neutral point of view) problem. Let me know if you have any questions. Biosthmors (talk) 15:30, 26 March 2012 (UTC)