User talk:Jgd57/sandbox

Link to recommendations to improve edits: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I3nYyQGjbrwohFHpXOQfUMC26mVErJf1DQX-lcYJBGQ/edit Samanthadies (talk) 18:43, 15 April 2019 (UTC)

Lauren's Response to Julia's Edits
Adult Relationships - Overall this paragraph is well written and easy to follow. There's a lot of extra commas though, so I would look over the paragraph again and double check that.

Background - His parents agreed and he spent the remainder of his time in high school at this boarding school (delete extra information) forming valuable. - "It was Green's experience at boarding school that inspired to write the novel." -- Change 'the novel" to Looking for Alaska - You use "Indian Springs High School" a lot maybe switch a couple to just high school

Overall your additions are all well written and seem important to understanding the novel. Aside from the couple comments I added above I really liked your information and made me want to read the book! Lauren cox21 (talk) 19:06, 15 April 2019 (UTC)Lauren_cox21