User talk:Jglocastillo/sandbox

My's peer review
Hi I was wondering if you have started drafting for the final page yet?

Skylar's Peer Review
Hi Gloria!

I think your plan to add to both of these pages to make the affordable housing programs more accessible and understandable is a great one! Especially in relation to how these programs work and what the costs/concerns with these programs are. I look forward to seeing more!

One are where I am a bit lost with your article plan: Will you talk about the nonprofits and section 8 housing programs together, or keep these solutions separate? I think there is a lot of different areas of information right now, and I am sure you have a plan to fit them all together, but I think it may be a lot to describe the programs/legislature and talk about benefits and challenges, along with other organizations getting involved, all in the same section. Maybe break them up into a few sections or choose a specific point to focus on? Just a thought.

I think that understanding Bay Area is super important but hard to access, so I look forward to learning more through your article, since you already have so many good points of information and sources!

Smartin gpp (talk) 21:02, 1 November 2018 (UTC)Skylar