User talk:Jgoula

Hi John, my name is Sam!

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Review
Hi John, my name is Nick and I have made some edits to your page.

While I think you have a good start, I think there are some edits on your part.

I felt that the lead is a good start, but it is too long. As I said in the edits, I think that splitting that paragraph up and organizing it the page better with different subsections would make it flow better. I also felt that the similar words list was a bit too much. Try cutting it down with the most important words.

I see that you made some sections for syntax and phonology, and I hope you fill that with some interesting information. I feel that it would be worthwhile to include stuff such as word order, questions, and the phonological elements of this language.

Adding more morphemes esp. prefixes would be beneficial.

You have some links linking to other Wiki articles in the beginning, but then as the page goes on, they disappear.

There is a paragraph in the middle that should be looked at. There are numerous mistakes and at some points it is incoherent. There is an I there, but that may have been a quote, and if it is, then quote it. If not, remove it.

Nickjb115 (talk) 00:04, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

Review
Hi, just wanted to say thank you for editing my page, I will correct your suggestions, thanks again! Ec725 (talk) 16:09, 7 April 2017 (UTC)

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