User talk:Jgriffin094/Waldschmidt Hall

Hi Jgriffin094, I just wanted to let you that I have reviewed your contributions. I am not very good at navigating Wikipedia (my husband calls me a Luddite (he’s not wrong) and often laughs at my lack of tech knoweledge). So, I hope I did it right. Either way, I think your contributions were wonderful. Cadie Cobler Rose (talk) 22:31, 17 May 2020 (UTC)Cobler Rose

Hi, I thought that your article was well written and had good details on your topic. I thought that the Lead was a good introduction to the topic. However, it mentions the Willamette River, which does not appear anywhere else in the article. I thought that the main body was well crafted. For organization, in the History section, the third main paragraph diverts into the specific renovations made. Since the Details section spends more time explaining the building's architectural details, it would make sense to move the specific details there. Overall, an informative and clearly written article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by WanderingAlice (talk • contribs) 21:06, 18 May 2020 (UTC)