User talk:Jgseidne/Crime control

I don't think there is much I can say except you need to add your edit and references completely. Baileymlr (talk) 19:07, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Now that you have uploaded your work here I just wanted to update my review and give you some feedback. When I clicked on your links, I was led to the abstract of your first reference rather than the actual article, which may be fine if that's what you wanted to do, but if not I wanted to let you know so you could link it directly to your article. Also, on your second reference it says that the information on it is no longer updated so you might want to change your reference to one that may be more reliable. Other than that your contribution seems to benefit the stub. You could always add a little bit more, but you keep it to the point and help it be direct. I would say again, check over for coherency and any spelling/grammatical errors, but good job! Baileymlr (talk) 04:15, 10 December 2020 (UTC)