User talk:Jgunasti86/sandbox

Hi! Your revision of the paragraph looks really great. I think your writing style is more clear than the original. I agree with you that there is more room for expanding on the nature/culture binary and how queer ecology deconstructs it. I'm confident that you can make that happen once you find a citation for the sentence that still needs one. It would also be helpful to have a bit more explanation of the "web of interactions" definition of nature. I also agree that the page currently doesn't define queer ecology very clearly; it just follows some of the academic history of the term/idea/field. I like the idea of using your paragraph in the introduction section. One tiny thing to change is that Judith Butler's Gender Trouble is a book, not an article. Overall, your work looks fantastic and is definitely on the right track for improving the original article! --Mirandabck (talk) 18:25, 24 April 2019 (UTC)