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Use of the "author's we"
In this edit you replaced "we" with "one", e.g. replacing First, we consider... with First, one considers.... This is not necessarily wrong, but it also not strictly necessary. The first case uses what is known as the author's we which, according to Wikipedia's Manual of Style, is an acceptable use of the first person within formal encyclopedic writing. WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 18:25, 22 February 2023 (UTC)