User talk:Jhenderson1

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Hello, Jhenderson1, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:
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Please remember to sign your messages on talk pages by typing four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or, and a volunteer should respond shortly. Again, welcome! GermanJoe (talk) 06:50, 16 December 2017 (UTC)

Corporate entertainment
Hello Jhenderson1, thank you for your contributions to this article. I have removed and rephrased some sections throughout the article. Wikipedia articles should be generally written in a formal dispassionate tone - aka dry and boring ;), so several of the used informal phrases had to be changed or trimmed (see WP:NPOV and WP:TONE for more info). Also, your edits focussed too much on specific events as "examples" instead of describing the topic in general. Such examples are commonly used in textbooks, but are usually not suitable for an encyclopedic article. If you have any questions about the changes, please feel free to message me on my talkpage - I'd be glad to help with these aspects. Or WP:TEAHOUSE is also a good forum to get Wikipedia-related advice. Best regards. GermanJoe (talk) 07:08, 16 December 2017 (UTC)