User talk:Jhoover1828

Suggestions for Draft:Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service)
Hi there and welcome to Wikipedia! I had a look at your draft Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service), and here are some suggestions for improving it: George8211 / T 19:39, 13 January 2015 (UTC)
 * Don't advertise -- this is what gets a lot of stuff deleted. Wikipedia articles have to be neutral (the official policy is at WP:NPOV).
 * External links -- not too many, and they go in a section called "External links" near the bottom of the page.
 * Reference it -- this will make your article more substantial, and good references (WP:RS if you feel like reading it) will make your subject seem notable.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) (January 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:29, 14 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) (March 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Jhoover1828 Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:DGG&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Jhoover1828 reviewer's talk page].

I also need to call your attention to our Terms of Use, particularly with respect to paid contributions without disclosure

 DGG ( talk ) 11:11, 4 March 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) (April 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Worldbruce was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Jhoover1828 Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Worldbruce&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Jhoover1828 reviewer's talk page].
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Worldbruce (talk) 19:33, 11 April 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service) has been accepted
 Mr. Delivery (Food Delivery Service), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Grognard Extraordinaire Chess (talk) Ping when replying 21:59, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
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