User talk:Jiahualin

Your submission at Articles for creation: Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety (February 3)
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The comment the reviewer left was:

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EROS message 09:10, 3 February 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety
Greetings. Editorial style of presentation is apparent in your submission. I'll take the introduction lead as example. ''For more than 60 years, the Institute helped to improve the safety and health of people throughout the world. It was owned and operated by Liberty Mutual Insurance, Boston, MA, USA.'' This extract is considered not encyclopaedic and editorial in style as it reads very much like a newspaper article from a tabloid press. Your writing is too much like writing an essay. Hence, do read these for more clarity: Writing better articles, Manual of Style/Words to watch. Moreover, per the reason declined, there are numerous parts of your submission which are not inclined with citation of the references used. This is to prevent the facts you provided from being challenged in the future. EROS message 09:35, 4 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety (October 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by K.e.coffman were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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K.e.coffman (talk) 22:45, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety


Hello, Jiahualin. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Liberty Mutual Research Institute for Safety".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CptViraj (📧) 18:15, 15 July 2019 (UTC)