User talk:Jiang1725/Maximum likelihood estimation/5740 Grant L Peer Review

Peer Review
The Lead Section of the wiki page starts off strong but then the ending isn't as cohesive (2nd and 3rd paragraphs). I would suggest expanding on the specific information provided in the end of the summary section. I would also include the importance of the maximum likelihood. I feel like there should be more of an emphasis on its use and importance.

The main article feels like a math textbook. I think that it is a little deterring. I would suggest making making the page more readable, since it is currently formatted in an overly complicated way. This also applies to the examples given, therefore you could add the example shown in class about pregnancy cycles for smokers and non-smokers or the tree example from the homework. I would also consider adding some figures if possible to provide some visuals. There are currently very few.

The references page is definitely quite filled, therefore there might be some useful sources for you to find examples or figures.

I would say the existing article currently has all the sections that you would probably want to discuss, however the manner in which everything is explained in unnecessarily confusing. I think you could rewrite a lot of it in layman's terms. 5740 Grant L (talk) 00:40, 14 November 2021 (UTC)