User talk:Jiayue zhang/sandbox

=Evaluations=

Spelling/Grammar
Does not meet Standard
 * Note:There are quite a few grammatical errors that I would advise going over as well as adding in words to make better sense of your writing.

Language
Meets Standard

Organization
Meets Standard
 * Note: I like the chronological order in the draft.

Coding
Meets Standard

Validity
Meets Standard

Completion
Nearly Meets Standard
 * Note:I think that this is a good start but some of the information need to be expanded upon a little to make it more substantial.
 * For example expand why it military use came into decline or a reason to why it was used in the first place.

Relevance
Nearly Meets Standard
 * Note:same as mentioned above.

Spelling/Grammar
Does Not Meet Standard
 * Note:The grammar needs some work, not trying to be rude. I understand that you are most likely an exchange student.

Language
Nearly Meets Standard
 * Note: "Can use better word choice===

Coding
Meets Standard

Validity
Meets Standard

Completion
Meets Standard I like how your contriubtion was written in chronological order of events.