User talk:JillSutton12/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

Generally, you've done a good job, information is well-organized and you've provided good information about her background and writing. The following suggestions are mostly minor copy-editing issues:
 * You may want to review the article for copy edits and tone, like that in the Janise Yntema article, for instance:
 * "Margaret Emily Shore and Arabella Susanna Shore were gifted with the knowledge of literacy and had a passion for learning. When it came to her writing, Louisa Shore with often affiliated with her sister Arabella Shore."
 * To something like this (if I'm understanding the points correctly - I'm a little lost on "knowledge of literacy" and assume what's meant is literature):
 * "Margaret Emily Shore and Arabella Susanna Shore were intelligent with an passion for learning and an interest in literature. Louisa Shore often worked as a writer with her sister Arabella Shore."


 * External links, like those for Arabella Susanna Shore and The Spectator should not be used in the body of the article, but they could be used as a source / reference.
 * Titles of magazines, books, works, newspapers should be in italics - magazine or journal article titles should be in quotations.
 * You may also want to look at Janise Yntema for the "lead" / intro section, which is a short summary of everything in the article. For some articles this summary can be a few paragraphs. Others (like Yntema's article and probably this one) can be a few sentences long.
 * Two of the citations are incomplete.

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 18:30, 4 November 2014 (UTC)