User talk:Jillian Boyle/sandbox

Jillian, I think you are not likely going to be ready to launch by the end of class, even though this is tremendously improved, and I can see how hard you worked on it. Ask Ben (your group editor) to read the piece out loud while you keep the edit window open. There are too many sentence-level and grammatical errors here to pass muster with Wikipedia, but with help from your peer editors, you will have a B on the essay.Ssenier (talk) 00:24, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

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Jillian, this is a really great start! Organizationally it's a little all over the place--but it's totally fine to just dump your ideas into your sandbox like this. Look carefully at other sample articles, and think about how you want to organize your information.

In your case you are probably going to need more than three sources to make this "stick." The three you have are not bad, but they are small announcements of her awards, and might flag her "notability" among Wikipedia editors. DON'T neglect Google Books! She gets quite a few shout-outs in serious scholarly books, Native "almanacs" and other texts that are easy to find there. Quote as many as you possibly can.

Have you contacted her? Any luck there?