User talk:Jillincolunga/sandbox

Peer Review[edit] Chantal Robles: The intro is clear and it highlights the main components of the organization i.e. start date, goals. The background does a good job at presenting the way that this organization is a direct response to white supremacists powers and race based policies/laws/institutions. There are grammatical errors throughout, but given that this is a draft I know this will be addressed and fixed later on! The heading on incarceration does a good job in providing evidence as to why these mothers ROC felt it was necessary to start an organization that centered around unity, empathy and testimonies. (Important values in black feminist epistemology)

Peer Review Response: Based on my peer response I am going to go back and edit it to make sure there are no grammar errors. I will also try to go back and look for more policies that fit into the incarceration tab.