User talk:Jillychoi/China–Sudan relations

I enjoyed your article on China Sudan Relations. You took a complex topic and explained it very well. You covered the most salient points that influence their relationship, and the article was well organized and annotated. It was engaging to read how the story unfolded. Looking carefully, sometimes the word choice that helps the flow of the paragraph can be what was making me perceive a slight China favored lean. For example, here is one sentence, “Not only did China provide economic support, but also supplied its own workers to help execute various aid projects and sent out batches of doctors to work in Chinese built hospitals that had opened in various parts of Sudan.” I feel that wording like, “not only did”, “own workers” and “batches of doctors” are all true but make it sound less neutral than, “China provided economic support, workers to help execute various aid projects, and doctors to work in Chinese built hospitals that had opened in various parts of Sudan.” Jagcataldo (talk) 06:53, 7 April 2020 (UTC)