User talk:Jim1138/Archive 19

Machine Gun Kelly
Machine Gun Kelly's name is Colson Baker not Richard Colson Baker. Here is proof. Go to mgklaceup.com and click "enter site" in the top right corner. Click on "Bio" on the top left corner and then scroll down and read. His name will read "Colson Baker" — Preceding unsigned comment added by Julia086 (talk • contribs) 18:07, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Union Jack (newspaper)
Hello,

I am trying to get advice on how to stop someone "hijhacking" our Wikipedia listing. The page I am referring to is "http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Union_Jack_%28newspaper%29" which unbeknownst to us was changed several times by a former "licensee" who was in breach of contract with our company Union Jack Publishing, Inc. USA.

As you will see the initial entry was made back in 2006, and remained like that until DMMILLAR changed it to make it appear as though the Canadian version he held legitimately for 6 months was the only Union Jack, which it of course is not. After spotting the change last month I edited the page and put it back to our domain, and it has been changed back again, by DMMILLAR. Today, I changed it back again, but seems a tedious and amateurish & childish way of dealing with this matter.

Any suggestions you may have would be appreciated.

Thanks,

Jeff Choularton Union Jack Newspaper, USA Since 1982

Just a few Verifiable sources:

http://www.babcphiladelphia.com/babc-newsletter/ Look at the the RSS feed for "UNION JACK NEWSPAPER"

http://www.babc-pittsburgh.org/babc_links.asp Go down to UK News/General Information

http://www.anglotopia.net/anglophilia/union-jack-newspaper-for-anglophiles-and-ex-pats/

http://www.britishflorida.com/index.php/PublicationsBritish.html

http://juliagayle.com/juliagayleusamedia.html

http://www.britsource.com/British_Expat_Newspapers/California_Expat_Newspapers/

http://www.britsinternational.com/links.html Under British Newspapers in the USA

http://www.britamclub.com/links.html

http://www.alexa.com/siteinfo/ujnews.com#

The last two links are using DMMILLAR's own words in his self promotion during the six month period he held a legitimate license to produce the Union Jack Newspaper back in 2012.

http://memberfiles.freewebs.com/76/62/79916276/documents/Union%20Jack%20Newspaper.pdf

excerpt from study DMMILLAR created: ABOUT UNION JACK The Union Jack (UJN) is the only national British newspaper serving North America and has a readership in print of 300,000. Founded in 1982 and until recently only published in the United States and online, UJN has been providing news for the British community, as well as the general populace wanting stories and features from a British standpoint. Currently, it has nine employees in the United States.

http://business.financialpost.com/2012/06/18/newspaper-for-british-expats-hopes-to-make-mark-in-canada/

and finally. ..

please take a look at the history of this page and see the initial entry was made for Union Jack Newspaper produced and published in the United States. I do not see how some person can come along with his own blurb about something of an irrelevant matter and "replace" our information? Please explain if I'm missing something Jim1138? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jeffc529 (talk • contribs) 19:40, 4 June 2013 (UTC)

Elphaba
The original text says "Elphaba discovers that the Quadling Turtle Heart may in fact have fathered Nessarose, it is also implied that Turtle Heart was also her mother's lover." The second half of that sentence is, of course, redundant, since in order to father Nessarose, he would have to have been her mother's lover. The more interesting fact that was confirmed during that trip was Frex's admission that he and Melena "shared" Turtle Heart. They were both his lovers. This is why I changed it to read "Elphaba discovers that the Quadling Turtle Heart may in fact have fathered Nessarose, and was also her father's lover". This is both accurate and succinct. Not sure what the issue is. 173.59.25.13 (talk) 03:55, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I accept your argument. I see you have replaced your edit and added an wp:edit summary. The edit summary should help. Thanks, and my apology for not examining your edit closer and reverting you. Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 04:01, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

Border War: Talk
In reference to your message, the deleted portion in question was slander, which is illegal. Since KManBlue seems intent on continuing to commit slander, I corrected the situation by removing my own contribution. Eodcarl (talk) 10:12, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

thanks for showing me the link re webs Justgetsbetter (talk) 21:35, 5 June 2013 (UTC)
Hi,

Thanks so much for sending me the link about which web sites can be allowed etc, as it states, sales is a grey area, but reading that was really helpful.

I deleted another so need to put it back up, please will you help me do that and tell me what I need to type in when editiong to put the web site back up there for example :

www.???.com

how do I do it, can you type back to me all the characters I need to press before and after the web address so I can just do it blind as I feel I must do this as it was my error.

Thanks Just gets better  or   Justgetsbetter (talk) 21:35, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

sincere thanks, you were helpful in sending the link I wish others were as helpful as you, you should have been a teacher, you were polite and informative, thank you with most sincerity.

PS one last ask - how do you do or where do you find these Justgetsbetter (talk) 21:35, 5 June 2013 (UTC)  I pasted them from the banner which is probably wrong :(

Request for editing my biography
Hello Jim,

All my attempts to correct false information about myself have failed by your actions disregarding my corrections. For example, I don't know why you insist on keeping the wrong date of birth or number of children or wife's name. These are a sample of false information about me there are much more errors that you don't let me fix them too. Please let me know how I can correct my own biography on my page without being removed by you. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mokash57 (talk • contribs) 00:45, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

USA Gold Coin
Hi, Jim..... I know you don't understand what I'm doing & you probably think it's all do to my autism, but it's not. I know you probably think or are saying "I'm messing with the USA Government" & you know what I am because if they want to try to make something with me then they will have to tell the truth & the truth is what I'm claiming. So let them do something about it to me I want to see it happen. I'm tired of all the lies I'm not a liar and the country is being decieved & I didn't do this I was used and robbed of my face and every thing since birth and used and maliciously abused & it's the most shocking story you or anyone could ever hear about. So trust me & bare with me & believe in me I know what I'm doing. I'm in the 10% group of autistics, which means I'm a genius ok, but I don't like to brag or boast. I live real hidden and secluded with no one except my kids and I'm in danger every day and night & it's a miracle I'm even alive. ok ok Leslie Corlione Cruz PS..... I do not in any way want to be famous in the general public & I am famous in the political sector though, but I have to do this right now to know that at least I cared & told the truth to the world ok. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.214.123.117 (talk) 08:59, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

Speedy deletion declined: Prof Akhtarul Wasey
Hello Jim1138. I am just letting you know that I declined the speedy deletion of Prof Akhtarul Wasey, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: not all professors are notable, but sifting the notable from the rest is an AFD task, not CSD. Thank you.  Ϣere Spiel  Chequers  14:05, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

user:Ryulong
User clearly is out to have his way and always files this ago at users who post on the episode guide I edited. MugsWrit (talk) 18:27, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

NEIU
You have a made a mistake. I've made the correct changes to Northeastern Illinois University's wikipedia page. I have linked Northeastern Illinois University back to the neiu webpage. Please stop changing what I post. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bacampus (talk • contribs) 18:27, 6 June 2013 (UTC)

Hello! There is a DR/N request you may have interest in.
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Moving My Medical Reports to 123MyMD
Hi Jim,

I am completely confused but what else is new for me? haha. our company My Medical Reports is now called 123MyMD. I tried to make the appropriate changes today but apparently I didn't do it correctly. I deleted things I shouldn't have deleted and I thought I could just change the name. Could you make the adjustments for me? I really would appreciate all your help? Also, I think I wasn't support to add links for our facebook, youtube and twitter sites. I'm sorry if I did something wrong. Please let me know if you need additional information.

All the best,

Joel

Joelcoast (talk) 00:29, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
 * It is easy to move. Did you want the article name to be 123MyMD or 123MyMD.com? Let me know! Probably one of the three links might squeak through, but all three... Jim1138 (talk) 00:36, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Brazilian 2012 GP - Vettel/Senna Crash
Hi,

Thank you for your message.

I thought the original "Senna hit Vettel" was very harsh on Senna. Looking at the footage of the crash, Vettel appears to turn in on Senna.

But no penalties were given to either driver so it must have been written off by the stewards as a "racing incident."

Therefore perhaps it is more accurately described as "Vettel and Senna collided with one another!?" Or "Vettel and Senna had a coming together!?" Or something similar but better written/described than above.

Just a thought.

Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.25.253.117 (talk) 00:34, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Beat me to it!
You let him know right as I was composing my (slightly longer ;) ) message. The more eyes the better!  Theopolisme ( talk )  01:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Northeastern Illinois University
Hi,

I guess I'm confused as to why you are deleting the information I am posting to the Northeastern Illinois University wikipedia page. The information I'm trying to post is directly from the University's website and U.S. Department of Education IPEDS public documents. To my knowledge, wikipedia is a social media platform that allows multiple users to contribute information. Are you seeing errors in the information I am posting?

I would appreciate any feedback

Bacampus (talk) 16:55, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Amanda Marcotte
well then obviously the current page is incorrect because it isn't cited either.

should i just cite the entirety of pandagon to show that pretty much the only things she ever writes about are patriarchy from the views of a middle class white woman. she's been through countless controversies dealing with her inability to consider women of other classes and races, and she's also been though countless controversies where she's demonstrated an inability to be objective in environments that are male-dominated but not male-centric. i don't know how much more she has to agree with wiki's own radical feminism page before you stop changing it back. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.166.88.177 (talk • contribs)
 * Amanda Marcotte has 24 references which seems considerable given the page length. I don't understand "radical". A feminist is, essentially, someone who wants equal rights for women. I see nothing radical about her. Nor do I see any reliable sources stating such. Jim1138 (talk) 18:13, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

i see no citation on the sentence in question which supports that she writes on feminism and politics, so you're saying that sentence should just be left out, right?

in her first opinionated podcast, she self described as a radical feminist. all you have to do is google her name to find a number of feminist websites calling her an idiot for her large number of radical positions that don't fall into other forms of feminism and her complete disregard for anything that isn't white, middle-class female centric.

just because you "don't understand radical," doesn't mean that there aren't different strains of feminism. maybe try reading the wikipedia page if you're confused? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.166.88.177 (talk) 20:52, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Moving My Medical Reports to 123MyMD
Hi Jim,

I would love the article to be named 123MyMD. If you feel like the links wouldn't get through, then you don't have to include them.

Thanks for all the work you do. It is so appreciated! Have a great weekend.

-Joel-

Joelcoast (talk) 18:52, 7 June 2013 (UTC) - Hi Jim, I am completely confused but what else is new for me? haha. our company My Medical Reports is now called 123MyMD. I tried to make the appropriate changes today but apparently I didn't do it correctly. I deleted things I shouldn't have deleted and I thought I could just change the name. Could you make the adjustments for me? I really would appreciate all your help? Also, I think I wasn't support to add links for our facebook, youtube and twitter sites. I'm sorry if I did something wrong. Please let me know if you need additional information. All the best, Joel Joelcoast (talk) 00:29, 7 June 2013 (UTC) It is easy to move. Did you want the article name to be 123MyMD or 123MyMD.com? Let me know! Probably one of the three links might squeak through, but all three... Jim1138 (talk) 00:36, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Talkback
JamesBWatson (talk) 21:40, 7 June 2013 (UTC)

Hello Jim, I changed the information on the Infantry Weapons Officer page because it was wrong. I cited the Marine Corps Infantry Training and Readiness Manual for the bulk of the change. Everything else is from my own experience as a Marine of 22 years who wears the Bursting Bomb. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.172.221.106 (talk) 03:37, 8 June 2013 (UTC)

Neener-neener
fffuuuu — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.202.241.66 (talk) 08:33, 9 June 2013 (UTC) sdf

howdy Jim1138/re: Marcotte
I'll fix the Pandagon to reflect where she is currently writing.. and 'radical feminist' is pretty much a weasel word (in my opinion) so plain old 'feminist' is fine. I hope to keep working on updating her profile, her work stuff is years old. And hope to find some interviews and talks she's given. Have a nice day!! Cap020570 (talk) 21:37, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

FC Sheriff
see FC Sheriff Tiraspol, see HG... When the article Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/List of famous FC Sheriff former players will appear in article space? I think the article 'List of famous FC Sheriff former players' is ready. It will decorate Wikipedia now. How long will it take? --217.19.208.101 (talk) 07:26, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I removed the link from FC Sheriff Tiraspol as links from an article to an "article for creation" are likely to be short lived. I am not very familiar with the wp:AFC process. You might want to review Starting an article I see that most articles in AFC have a submission template, but Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/List of famous FC Sheriff former players does not. An example is []. Do you need to add a Template:AFC submission? A robot then usually changes it to a "review waiting" template. I notice that "List of famouse FC Sheriff..." does not. I am not sure who to point you to. Hope this helped. You might try wp:help Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 07:58, 17 June 2013 (UTC)
 * BTW: what was the see HG for? Jim1138 (talk) 07:59, 17 June 2013 (UTC)

please reply to me on my talk page as soon as possible
kapeesh. thanx. 117.217.150.9 (talk) 06:31, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Again who are dude? And why should I care? Quit bothering me with your bullshit as if u work for wikipedia get lost dipshit.....you've been warned — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.226.178.124 (talk) 07:09, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

RREGARDING REMOVEL OF EMINENT PERSONALITY FROM YAMUNANAGAR
HELLO JIM 1138 YOU HAVE WRONGLY REMOVED THE DESCRIPTION ABOUT NIRMAN KAPOOR,WHO IS VEY EMINENT PERSONALITY OF YAMUNANAGAR,YOU CAN CONFIRM THIS FACT AT YOUR OWN END OR PUT THE NAME NIRMAN KAPOOR IN GOOGLE AND SEE ABOUT THAT MAN,I DO HOPE THAT YOU WILL ADD THE NAME OF NIRMAN KAPOOR (115.241.132.135 (talk) 07:51, 18 June 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 115.241.132.135 (talk) 07:47, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Hey dude quit bothering me I'm not disrupting anything u are.....and u do not know these people or cannot make desisions on my edits so please stop harrassing me or I will report u....u do not have the authority to edit or chastise me thank you....last and only time I'm mentioning this to you....if you bother me again.....I will slam u guys from so many vps's u won't know what to do — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.82.64.160 (talk) 08:01, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Recent changes to pages
Good day,

The recent changes made to the pages are done so as to reflect a neutral tone in the articles, without which may be biased in nature.

Words such as : - "homophobic" > "not accepting of homosexuality" - "Anti-discrimination" > "Protection for homosexuals" as with a few other changes.

As a Wikipedia article which many people may refer to, I believe it is in the interest of the readers to read the articles in a matter-of-fact manner without prejudice.

Thank you.

Andy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 61.8.222.74 (talk) 08:51, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for coming and helping out I hope everything on tha article looks ok Im just trying to figure this all out — Preceding unsigned comment added by SpeakTheTruth13 (talk • contribs) 09:06, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Isle of Wight Deer
Hi Jim1138

Thanks for your message although I do not understand why you have removed my edit. Please also bear with me as I am not that brilliant with computers.

The information regarding wild/ feral deer on the Isle of Wight needed updating, basically these creatures are now being sighted more frequently and in differing locations, I included the citations merely as an independent means of verifying what I was stating, i.e. that wild deer are occasionally seen here. I am sorry if this contravenes Wikipedia guidelines, but encyclopedias do need to have correct and up to date information. I have no interest in promoting any commercial enterprise but a serious concern that I do have is the misinformation that currently abounds about our local deer population is corrected.

Perhaps you can suggest a way forward?

Best wishes,

Tim

213.123.39.241 (talk) 16:07, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Re: your edit on the CHANDRA page
Dear Mr. Jim, This is regarding the removal of an useful information by you from the wiki page of CHANDRA. I added the very useful Indian astrology factor CHANDRASHTAMA DAYS. That is chandrashtama unfavourable days according to the moon(chandra)'s 8th position from a person's moon sign(rashi). So added the link to the useful website www.chandrashtama.com to help the people to know the chandrashtama unfavourable days. So that content I added is important and useful to the people. So don't remove my edit. I don't know whether you are aware of the famous chandrashtama days, which are very popular in INdia. People will avoid important work and travel on chandrashtama days. My website is the first only website in the world for chandrashtama days(dedicated website).

Thanks & Regards, SRIRANGAM RAMESH GURU — Preceding unsigned comment added by 122.174.184.22 (talk) 06:42, 19 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Your edit promotes a commercial website. That is wp:spam. See WP:ADV. Please do not add links for advertising. Thank you Jim1138 (talk) 06:49, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

If you don't allow link to other website. then how in many wikipedia pages websites of leading websites are listed
If you don't allow link to other website. then how in many wikipedia pages websites of leading websites are listed. I have the following strong evidence that in the following pages of wikipedia you have allowed commericial website links. MANGAL DOSHA page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mangal_Dosha listed private websites http://www.mangaldoshujjain.info/ http://www.astrosage.com/free/mangal-dosha-report.asp

Like the above page, in Astrology wiki pages, I happen to see many commericial website links. MY question to you is are you getting payment from them to list their pages. You are talking about rules. then how you allowed those leading websites like ASTROSAGE.

So your activity is unethical. You are not permitting my very useful website. but allowing many commerical websites in your pages. I think you don't know the particular use of chandrashtama days in India. You think I edited only for my promotion. Try to understand the main intention is to help the people to know their chandrashtama unfvourable days.

Looking for your reply

My email" rameshguruastrologer@gmail.com

SRIRANGAM RAMESH GURU — Preceding unsigned comment added by 122.174.184.22 (talk) 07:02, 19 June 2013 (UTC)


 * My reply: Two wrongs don't make a right. don't spam. Sneaking advertisements onto someone else's website to promote your own is unethical. Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 07:06, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

Deer Isle of Wight & Camp Hill Prison
Hi Jim,

Regarding my deer comments would the citation from the Steam Railway be Ok to include? If not I shall look for other sources but as I said before my intention was that the information on our local Deer should be correct and up to date.

I am not familiar with your reference to Camp Hill Prison but it may have been removed because it closed in March this year.

Best wishes,

Tim

213.123.39.241 (talk) 10:59, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

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Vera596
After there probation ,Correction officers request to buy a off duty firearm,after that approval, they don't need approval to buy additional weapons,just notify the department of the additional weapons. Furthermore Correction officers Must stay firearm qualified as a condition of there employment. However,some officers who are medically monitored (MMR)as they call it,could have "NO GUN" stamped on the back of there ID card, Otherwise any officer could walk in to a gunsmith, gun store, show his ID and purchase a handgun. At the end of there career,(retirement) NYC law-enforcement must request what is known as a "Good Guy Letter" in order to get a carrier permit.This letter allows thee retired officer to purchase semi-auto or revolver weapons,(no automatic weapons),unless the officer has criminal charges pending or some psychological evaluation against them. Comm. Kelly(NYPD) denied all officers who got 3/4 medical retirement (from sept.11 attack)there good guy letters,Dept. of Correction followed with there officers who worked at ground zero. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vera596 (talk • contribs) 11:28, 19 June 2013 (UTC)

you are wrong ,do you know what consent degrees are? thats where the federal statues ,from a lawsuit in the 1980s, and it is a state statue, since 1994 all Correction officers have to be firearm qualified as there condition of employment, go to nyc GOV. citywide adm.services check under Correction officer job, you will find it listed under firearm qualification , as far as off duty, after probation you request a off duty firearm after that you just notify them of firearms you purchase, the only ones you can carry off duty that are allowed ones, you do not need a carry permit, but you do have to qualify with them.yes in 1987 when I started you needed permission to purchase every firearm, not any more. I have several firearms now, if you are MMR or pending charges or a bad shooting they can take them away from you, but any city department can do that.(law-enforcement) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vera596 (talk • contribs) 01:34, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

my source is NYC gov.citywide adm. service, job title, correction officer, scroll down to firearm qualification. the edit will continue... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vera596 (talk • contribs) 06:03, 20 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Wrong about what? I undid one of your edits for bad punctuation and I corrected another of your edits for bad punctuation.


 * I undid this edit (My edit summary: rv bad sentence format, missing space between sentences, no cap). Your edit in blue: "and deadly force and issue summonses. correction officers are peace officers on and off duty " You did not have a space between "summonses." and "correction". You did not capitalize "correction". You did not append a period/full stop to the end of the sentence.


 * I corrected two more of your mistakes with this edit. The original text was "summonses..." (your edit in blue) "summonses, On and off duty. ". You capitalized "On" in the middle of the sentence. It should read "summonses, on and off duty." A word should only be capitalized if it is a proper noun such as a name "Jake", title "Mr. Simmons", and others (see John A. Logan Collegs: Rules for Capitalization - google "capitalization rules" for more info). I also corrected this condition of there employment to condition of their employment. "there" generally refers to a place: "the house over there" "their" is possessive, it is used to indicate ownership or association with: "their home", "their college", "their own kind", "their employment".


 * I myself have problems recognizing spelling and grammatical errors; so I use a trick. I copy and pasting the suspect text into Microsoft Word (or any other program with a good grammar / spell checker). Run the spell check on the text, correcting anything as needed, then paste it back into my Wikipedia edit page. As the Wikipedia markup is not generally compatible with grammar checkers, I would recommend doing an edit and clicking on "Show preview" (don't click the "Save page" button yet to avoid using unnecessary server space). Then copy the text you are working on from the preview area (not the edit area) and paste it into your word processor / grammar checker. Run the checker and make note of the errors, fix them in the Wikipedia editor, and repeat until there are no more errors. Note: grammar checkers do not catch all errors and may flag some correct usage.


 * I would strongly suggest going through New York City Department of Correction as there are a number of errors. If you have any questions, feel free to leave me a note on my talk page here. Best of luck. Jim1138 (talk) 07:19, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

hi Jim,I will try to correct the grammar, I dont have to check with DOC , I worked for them,( Captain) if you have any questions regarding DOC, you can ask me , one of my commands was Rodman's neck,Bronx (NYPD Police range), I have rules & reg of the department & orders for firearms. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vera596 (talk • contribs) 14:59, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

I dont know if your getting my messages or not ,I have told you 3 times where to go for the condition of employment, firearm qualification. Go to NYC GOV. citywide adm. services, exams ,title correction officer,scroll down to firearm qualification, as a condition of employment, Correction officers must stay firearm qualified. As per federal and state statute. please read it. yes the NYPD has to stay qualified too ,but they go twice a year ,once to Rodmans neck,Bronx & Brooklyn, indoor range. Correction officers go once a year to Rodmans neck, except Correction's special units,emergency services unit, intelligence unit & Rikers island security unit, they go twice a year.I know this because I was assigned to Rodmans neck police range for a year as a correction officer. I have all the rules & regulations of said department. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vera596 (talk • contribs) 10:12, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Official name of Greece's neighbour is FYROM (Former Yugoslav Republic Of Macedonia)
I wonder to who i talk with this faulse information problem on behalf of Wikipedia. As you may see on United Nations map the right official name for Greece's neighbour is as my deleted(on behalf of wikipedia) alteration (i.e FYROM). http://www.un.org/Depts/Cartographic/map/profile/greece.pdf Damian OZY WIKI (talk) 07:41, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * The place to discuss it would be Talk:Republic of Macedonia. There does seem to be a big discussion going on. Currently consensus is for ROM. You would need to get ROM changed to FYROM before changing it elsewhere. Otherwise things will just get confusing... Best of luck. Jim1138 (talk) 07:46, 23 June 2013 (UTC)
 * I personally don't have any investment in ROM or FYROM, just consistency on Wikipedia. Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 07:48, 23 June 2013 (UTC)

Added External Link
Hello Jim,

I am sorry, for this is my first time using Wikipedia, I was unaware that was against the guidelines. My apologies. I will learn how to establish an internal link.

Gabriel — Preceding unsigned comment added by BrainConX (talk • contribs) 07:45, 24 June 2013 (UTC)

Boobies
What's wrong wit boobies? We all love boobies.

Crazy8

64.130.185.204 (talk) 08:31, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Notice of Edit warring noticeboard discussion
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