User talk:Jimmiejohnsonconfetti/Dallas Jenkins/Iowa21

I was impressed with the amount of description you included in this article. I think it was important to include that "aha" moment that Dalles Jenkins had in while mowing his lawn. I also like how you split the article up, first focusing on his early life, then his career, then on different films he was a part of.

The only change I could think of would be to include why he and his wife thought it would be shameful to be listed as "Christian" filmmakers. Did they think they'd be ridiculed for professing their faith? Did they not see as many opportunities for movies? What was the overall reason they felt shame for being Christian filmmakers?

Other than that one recommendation, I think this was a well-written article, you included a lot of detail, and I can tell that you spent time making sure this article was written well. All of your links work so no worries there.