User talk:Jimmygotclass/sandbox

Overall good job on writing the article. It had a neutral tone to it and everything seemed to be relevant. I checked the citations and they all worked fine and everything was supported by a fact. When I first read it I was a little confused about what you were talking about. So I would say just have an opening sentence explaining what the paragraph it talking about. I'm not sure if you created a new section or added on to an old section. That's really the only thing that I would fix. (Lheiler02 (talk) 01:28, 3 December 2020 (UTC))

I thought this article was very well written and included a ton of great information. The citations were relevant, recent, and their links worked without a problem. The article had a very neutral tone and included information that was unbiased and did not overrepresent one viewpoint. When looking at the original article, it was almost identical to what you wrote, so it was definitely a tad difficult to tell what you added, and what was already there. Maxmcq11 (talk) 17:00, 3 December 2020 (UTC)