User talk:Jimmyzeet

Your submission at Articles for creation: C-Net 12.0 (April 7)
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— Sirdog (talk) 03:16, 7 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello Sirdog, thank you for you feedback on the article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:C-Net_12.0). My inspiration for creating this page was that there was next to nothing on the internet available about this software that I and many others remember so fondly.  Therefore, I was not able to find many references that refer to this topic directly.  I did however find a lot of sources that I thought would be sufficient.
 * Looking at this page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/C-Net_DS2) which is another C-Net version from the same era, it has no cited sources whatsoever. So looking at my page, where I found several and cited them properly (I thought), I thought I was in much better shape than the page on DS-2.  Do you have any advice for me?  Should I remove the sources and only leave the official manual?  Keep in mind that this was from 1987 so not a lot of out there.  Which is why I wanted this page.
 * Thanks for your time and for any advice you could give me.
 * -Jimmyzeet Jimmyzeet (talk) 23:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC)