User talk:JinJane

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Peer Review - Interactive art
JinJane’s article- Interactive art Hi JinJane it is lag16116, I wanted to write some words on the Interactive art article you were looking at!! Hope you are having a nice weekend!!

Looking at the article there is a lot of content in the article such as the overview of interactivity in art, the history, form, impact, events and places, tools, and also sections. Some of the sections are a little short such as the forms and impact section which could be elaborated on. Some of the hyperlinks in the article are red as they do not link to a page. This might a place to edit either with a link to the page or maybe a removal of the link until those respective pages are created. Additions that could be included are maybe some prominent examples of interactive arts.

I think this is a nice article as there are a variety of aspects to add. I am excited to see your additions to the page!!! :) Lag16116 (talk) 23:18, 12 February 2022 (UTC)