User talk:Jinkim28/sandbox

Make notes for improvement in your sandbox. In your sandbox, write a few sentences about what you plan to contribute to the selected article.

The education section of the article for the "Youth Unemployment in South Korea" seems not so informative. South Korea emphasizes education which is why more information on how education and youth unemployment relate seems like a good contribution. In addition, from having such a strong emphasis for education, there is a lot of competitiveness among children that leads to issues in health and fertility which should also have more information about.