User talk:JinxMage2314

Peer Review: 1. I liked the amount of information and detail in the article. It was a pretty long article with a lot of information so I felt like I knew everything about the topic after reading it. 2. The article seems to have few citations for the amount of information present. It would help give the article credibility to input more citations. 3. The most important improvement that could be made would be including more citations. 4. I could apply more information and more headings to my article, similar to the structure of this article. Jamisenrose (talk) 06:53, 22 May 2017 (UTC)