User talk:Jiwilson444

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Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit if you feel they have been resolved.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! SarahStierch (talk) 06:26, 15 June 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Dore Ashton, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! TheOneSean [ U &#124; T &#124; C ] 00:23, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
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Dore Ashton
Hi Jiwilson,

I've removed the claim that Dore Ashton's work was groundbreaking. I feel that it's a WP:peacock term and shouldn't be included without attribution. We can say, for example, that "The New York Times described her work as groundbreaking", but it's not Wikipedia's role to make such an assertion. Pburka (talk) 20:57, 4 July 2013 (UTC)