User talk:Jjame67/sandbox

The Lead
Your lead is too short, and it's not relevant to the article. This article is about a specific offshoot of Piggly Wiggly, not the company as a whole. You should probably choose a different article to work on. This one has too many issues.


 * Your new lead is much more promising, but it doesn't match the topic of the article. There's no need to define the CIA - there's another article of that, and you can link to it. Instead, you need to summarize CIA's activities in Africa. Josef Horáček (talk) 13:51, 13 March 2016 (UTC)