User talk:Jjb2576/sandbox

Interesting article one thing I would recommend is explaining some of the acronyms such as RBI and perhaps linking it to a page describing the concept futher, such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Run_batted_in or http://mlb.mlb.com/mlb/official_info/baseball_basics/abbreviations.jsp which has a compiled list of abbreviations in Baseball.

--TheMediator3TheMediator3 (talk) 16:45, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Great article. I noticed some punctuation errors as i was reading it. I found some more information about cleanup hitters and their value that i would recommend adding in your article. http://www.sportsmogul.com/baseball/help/BaseballStrategy.htm. You can also add some information about the history of cleanup hitters. http://espn.go.com/blog/sweetspot/post/_/id/15591/worst-cleanup-hitters-of-all-time. --Mujtaba1996 (talk) 16:55, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

The article was very straightforward and simple. I would have enjoyed just a little bit more commentary about the game of baseball but nonetheless your point and objective of the article was made clear. Below are a few websites for suggestion: htthttp://www.wisegeek.com/what-is-a-clean-up-hitter.htm http://cleanuphitter.com/mlb/ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adamtomlinson324 (talk • contribs) 23:33, 21 October 2014 (UTC)