User talk:Jjcarhar2024/sandbox

I thought that the article explains the issue on poverty very well. I also like how you gave suggestions to help with poverty reduction so help with the issue instead of just talking about why poverty is a problem today. All of the links worked for me. the only things I would fix are the few spelling and grammar errors made. overall, I liked the article. Marianacc02 (talk) 16:55, 11 December 2020 (UTC)

I thought the article was good and simple. But I think that was kind of the problem it was to simple. You reasoning were good but a little too weak I think you could have made it a bit more detailed or explain a little bit more. Also you forgot to create a link to the article you was using for this project. There was a few missed spelled words and sentence fragments. Otherwise, if you fixed those I think your good. The one thing I like about your draft is the way you started your draft.Iddibass123 (talk) 17:20, 13 December 2020 (UTC)