User talk:Jjnwgss91

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Hello I'm a student enrolled in WGSS365 class.

Fresh Off the Boat article edits
I went though the "Hegemonic Representation" section that you edited into the Fresh Off the Boat article, and each of its sources. It is clear from what you edited in that you do not understand what is needed for a professional article (contractions are not found in a professional essay, but you used them regardless). In addition, you made assumptions to speak on behalf of an entire ethnic group: you claimed that a majority of the show's Asian-American viewers could not relate to the show, but you did not provide a reliable source backing up this claim. In-fact, the source that you cited for that statement was published in 2008, half a decade before "Fresh Off the Boat" was even published as a book. Several sentences you edited in were off-topic and pertained to the film "The Sixteen Candles", which the show mocks in one of its episodes. You would not know this. Judging by the content of your edit, you only saw the first episode of the show, as all of your unsourced, unprofessional criticisms pertained to just the first episode of the show.

With all of these biased, unsourced statements in the section of the article that you edited in, I have taken it upon myself to delete that section and explain my reasons for doing so. Do not do this again. (Talk)  5:52, 18 January 2016 (UTC)