User talk:Jjtsch16/sandbox

The Plan
Add info from 3rd article in paragraph on phenomenological roots. Clarify this paragraph after that's done to make clear any jargin. (Look especially at the ontology sentence) Review and revise (after feedback) to make it as concise and clear as possible.

Feedback on draft
Jacob: This looks great. Very well written and concise. I agree with your notes to yourself above and in the text, about defining jargon and giving some more specific details, including about traditional phenomenology.

Small note: In the last paragraph, I think you mean coherently, not cohenerently.

Mbrzycki (talk) 18:04, 20 March 2019 (UTC)