User talk:Jjwalkman/sandbox

Adriana's Peer Reveiw
There is a lot of useful and detailed information presented here, and translating it into the actual Wikipedia article was fluid and well written. That being said the actual lay out of the sandbox is a little menacing. It's all short bits of scattered and mixed information in a very long list that's very hard to read. Making headers, organising into smaller chunks, and making a lead section would be beneficial to organising and make it easier to read. Other that, great refences and great work!Nosebleedy99 (talk) 19:14, 27 October 2018 (UTC)