User talk:Jkaback15/sandbox

Hi Julia, I thought that you did an amazing job redoing the original lead into Jane Dudley's life.When you mention how Jane Dudley was inspired by her time in the Walden school, are you able to cite this somewhere? I think that you should just pay attention to awkward sentence structure in your article. I think that ,in my article, I have some awkward structure. I think that your article is really good so far.