User talk:Jkaur95/sandbox

'''Gentrification in San Francisco ''' I really like that you’re focusing in on the gentrification movements in San Francisco specifically because I feel that a huge part of the push against it is coming from pressures led by the tech industry. I’m surprised that the topic itself doesn’t have much on the page and you have huge opportunity to expand, especially with academic and peer-reviewed journals as citations. Mentioning the pro and against movements of gentrification here would also be really helpful. Why does the tech industry believe that it is revitalizing neighborhoods? How is the culture here evolving?

Link the Chinese Progressive Association with the Chinatown anti-gentrification movements and Google bus protests with the Mission District anti-gentrification movements.

Gentrification

On the talk page for gentrification, one Wikipedian calls to remove Citation 61 on Google bus vandalism. I think it would help to attach your third Wikipedia page on Google bus protests in the actual page and expand on that section. Wikipedians are arguing against this section because they don’t see the relevance between Google bus protests and gentrification and I think you can help clarify that.

I think adding to the Gay Community section as you mentioned will be very useful.

Google bus protests

I think you should be careful about your POV on this page, because previous Wikipedias have called out the partisan views on the post. Remember to present both sides of the issue here.Ikandula (talk) 18:26, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think that the information that you intend to add is relevant and well thought out. Remember to address both sides of any argument to maintain neutrality.

For this assignment, one of the requirements is writing 25% new articles, so at least one. Right now, you only have 2/3-5 articles, so your next article should be completely new.

For your sub section on LGBTQ+ issues with gentrification, I feel that there could potentially be a lot of information there that may lead to its own page or more subsections to help maintain organization.

Also, if you find enough substantial information/sources on your Mission District and Chinatown topics, you could possibly write new articles for those. Otherwise, make sure the information you add to the Gentrification of San Francisco page is on topic.

Krista.EH (talk) 23:20, 29 October 2016 (UTC)