User talk:Jkgarland/sandbox

Peer Review for tetrataenite draft

 * The sections and headings that are going to be added are good and include necessary, basic information.
 * Consider combining several subsections together into a paragraph or two, since there's not that much information available on this metal.
 * Some great sources
 * Here's the results of an encyclopedia search that might be helpful for information besides that in databases.
 * Could expand on how tetrataenite is synthesized using sputter deposition and annealing.
 * Could expand on why tetrataenite is used to replace rare-earth magnets.
 * Could add to the identification information in the infobox.

Eek111 (talk) 18:56, 30 March 2018 (UTC)