User talk:Jkolli/Baby bonds

Great job with this article! I was very impressed with how comprehensive you made the information while also including many statistics and studies that could otherwise be difficult for readers to understand. Also, kudos for writing this article from scratch and using many sources. I would love to see more information relating to various opinions about baby bonds from its conception to current information. Since I have limited knowledge of baby bonds, this would help me understand why the program still has yet to be implemented. I would also appreciate a couple more sources in the last two sections to supplement the data. All in all, great work! Best of luck with your future edits. Michelle Gachelin (talk) 02:50, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Peer review
Nice job on starting this article! I think it's an interesting topic that is definitely more relevant in the status quo. I think you could make the article better if you changed the passive voice sentences (especially in the lead section) to active, and maybe added more articles that argue against Baby bonds or present more perspectives on it, if possible. Kezchow (talk) 03:38, 29 October 2020 (UTC)