User talk:Jkt16/sandbox

Peer Review 1 : https://canvas.sussex.ac.uk/courses/19347/assignments/78586/anonymous_submissions/EGUQ1 Peer Review 2 : https://canvas.sussex.ac.uk/courses/19347/assignments/78586/anonymous_submissions/j8HiX

Response to Peer Assessment: Thank you for the feedback. In my Wikipedia article, I will cut some of the sentences and make it simple to make it easier for the readers. Also, I will change my perspective in the article, from first person to third person to make it more professional. I think all the comments help me improve this article's quality.