User talk:Jlapi1

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Hello, Jlapi1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sandy Hook
"Moreover" is the correct term when amplifying a concept - "however" is used when contrasting, which is not the case. "Hoax" is sourced and more concise and forma; than "made up." Fringe figures" is sourced and correct; "people" is meaningless watering-down. And "whois" is an Internet term that was linked in the article until you took it out. If you don't understand what it is, please click the link. Please use the talkpage to discuss your changes.  Acroterion   (talk)   00:04, 12 December 2018 (UTC)