User talk:Jlherrera16/sandbox

Peer review
Everything you wrote is relevant to the article topic and neutral. However, you'd better make a "Heading" to improve visibility. Also, I recommend you to make a separate heading as a reference to make it clear and don't put just a website URL make it as a citation. The project, as well as purpose art, should be more concrete and be more specific. For example, not only mentioning the name of the book, "My body is my country", but also mentioning the story would be helpful to readers. Also, you can refer to some books in the library to fill out "early life" or "introduction" part. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yjkwn5118 (talk • contribs) 05:22, 20 February 2019 (UTC)

I believe you'll keep up the good work for the final draft and make something brilliant.

Thanks.