User talk:Jlingreen/sandbox

Feedback on Preliminary Bibliography
Hi, Jlingreen! You have some understanding of MLA style, but there are some details you need to attend to. First, all book and journal titles should be italicized. Also, review the rules for how to cite journal articles. One of your citations is in the "old" MLA format. Now, we use commas and abbreviations for "volumed" and "number" in the citation, like this: Author(s). "Title of Article." Title of Journal, Volume, Issue, Year, pages. For example: Bagchi, Alaknanda. "Conflicting Nationalisms: The Voice of the Subaltern in Mahasweta Devi's Bashai Tudu." Tulsa Studies in Women's Literature, vol. 15, no. 1, 1996, pp. 41-50. Remember also that "university" and "press" are abbreviated; e.g. Harvard UP, U of Michigan P, Cambridge UP. Also, if you found any of these sources through an online database or other electronic source, you need to include that info in the citation. For example, if you found a journal article in EBSCO or Proquest or JSTOR, you need to include the name of that database; the DOI, stable URL (if available), or general URL for the company/database owner, and the date you accessed the electronic source. Please carefully review the OWL at Purdue's summary of these rules at https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/08/ If you have any further questions, please let me know. Thanks! Amy E Hughes (talk) 16:31, 2 October 2017 (UTC)

Response to Feedback
Amy E Hughes I've updated my bibliography on my sandbox. Would you mind taking a look to see if I updated with correct MLA format? --Jlingreen (talk) 20:15, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

Feedback on Preliminary Bibliography (spring 2018)
Hi, Jlingreen! Your bibliography looks good. I see just couple of things you need to attend to. First, titles of books and also the "publisher" of articles, web pages, etc. should be in italics even if you accessed them online. For example: “Columbia University Awards the Kennedy Prize for Drama to Dominque Morisseau.” The Journal of Blacks in Higher Education, 28 Feb. 2014, www.jbhe.com/2014/02/columbia -university-awards-the-kennedy-prize-for-drama-to-dominque-morisseau/. Or: “ThreeWeeks Edinburgh.” ThreeWeeks Edinburgh, Three Weeks, www.threeweeksedinburgh.com/. Also, particularly for web pages that might be taken down or changed, you should include an access date (the date you visited the page). For more guidance on how to format citations for electronic sources, see https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/08/ -- it's a very helpful and brief guide. Happy writing! Amy E Hughes (talk) 20:21, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review Spring 2018
Hi Jordan!

I think your page has a lot of great qualities! One of the things that really popped out at me that could use an edit would be to take another look at how you might structure the section with Morisseau's works. I think that while the Detroit Projects are probably what she is best known for, that the other plays sort of look insignificant. I think a simple fix is just playing with bolding and which "heading" setting to use.

Another thing I thought of would be maybe to add a table at the bottom of the page showing the notable productions of her plays (maybe combining that with the current awards section, having tabs for "play," "theater," "year," and "award(s)"?)

Some smaller things I noticed were that there seems to be some debate as to what age she is - I wonder if you could find more solid information on her birth date? The "childhood" and "personal life" sections are pretty lackluster, so if you don't plan to expand them much I would suggest combining them.

Overall, I think the page is off to a great start!

Aoifemahood (talk) 03:49, 12 April 2018 (UTC)