User talk:Jlomax1/sandbox

most of your edits seem pretty good and solid. Are you planning to make tennis, NBA, soccer big titles? And what spot would you want to add them to the main wiki page? I would suggest creating a big title called "wage gap in sports or whatever you want to name it", and tennis, NBA, soccer would be the small section in that title. For example, "Factors" is a title, and endorsement deals, media coverage, economics return, etc are the small sections below.

In the "Soccer" section, soccer is very popular in South America and Europe. Have you thought of the worldwide pay gap in any of those countries?

In the "Impacts", besides the financial point of view, I think you can expand more on how does it impact gender in sports? And more solutions for the gender pay gap in sports (I see the one solution to that, "if the public aims to close the pay gap in the long term, the public should be working with young girls to let them understand that sports are worth participating")

This is a really interesting topic! You have really good information, I feel like some of the information that you have can be written more coherently. Maybe by rereading it out loud and by using more active sentences, this problem can be fixed. Another suggestion I have is to combine this information that you have gathered with the "Statistics" subtopic, which I'm assuming you were planning on editing it there anyway. However, I do suggest a change in the name of the title. I feel like that part of the article just talked about statistical examples of particular injustices in different sports. But since you have an in depth analysis of each sport, I think you can combine some of these examples to strengthen your argument. I think it would be a great idea to change that title there because what you have added goes beyond statistical information. Other than that, great job!Angmadera0509 (talk) 01:14, 2 December 2020 (UTC)