User talk:Jmartin12291994/sandbox

Peer Review by Phillip: Overall informative and a lot of stuff covered.

1st sentence need rewording, maybe instead just begin with "Ideas...". 2nd sentence is a fragment with no explanation. No period after 3rd sentence - paragraph just needs a grammar check and it should be fine. I'm not sure about the quote or how wikipedia articles use quotes, but I would err on the side of not using quotes and trying to make this most like an article introduction to keep it as professional as a wikipedia article can get...

Cancer - How are G quadriplexes stabilized? The sentence right before "therapeutics" subheading needs rewording

Therapeutics - 1st paragraph needs rewording/grammar editing to help make it a bit more coherent. Also this paragraph could use some more explanation, but I'm sure if you just hyperlink the big vocab words or ideas to their respective wiki pages it will be fine.

The Binding-Ligand section is great and maybe should go before the Therapeutics section so that the Ligands and G-quad interations are better understood when reading Therapeutics, or it might even be better to merge the Binding-Ligand section into the second paragraph of the Therapeutics section.

Try to stay away form contractions like "It's", I know it can be picky but it just sounds better.

Great coherent and concise final paragraph

Keysp (talk) 02:02, 14 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Sydney: Overall: Good. Needs some grammar work, citations, and hyperlinks to relevant pages.

Background Information - First sentence is a bit weak due to wording/grammar. Consider rearranging it - I would embed the quote by Aaron Klug in a different way or get rid of it. It doesn't really add much to the background info... - Last sentence was the best part. Consider expanding though. It really had the most relevant background information in the entire paragraph.

Cancer - First sentence needs a comma to read "...in eukaryotic cells, especially..." - Very choppy first paragraph. Consider adding some information about how G-quadruplexes are stabilized - Link c-myc gene to cancer. Right now I don't see it's connection to cancer or even G-quadruplexes

Therapeutics -What is TMPyP4? -Otherwise very good, only a small amount of grammar complaints. Just needs another read through probably.

Binding-Ligand -I would rename this section, but otherwise very good. Last paragraph was especially helpful in really understanding why ligands are important for this topic.

- Seaveys (talk) 01:40, 14 November 2018 (UTC)