User talk:Jmiah12/sandbox

Jeremiah's Peer Review
You have a great article and the lead section does a god job introducing what you are going to add to the article. There are just two small things that I would work on. One, I would read through the added section another time, there are a few grammar and spelling errors in the paragraphs. Second, you could add a little more information about the specific tribes that hunt pangolins for bushmeat and the specific markets that are used in the bushmeat trade. You use strong sources to support the information added and you keep a balanced perspective. I would also just consider adding more on the substance bushmeat trade to give a more equal representation of both sides of the trade. ChiBlue99 (talk) 16:54, 24 March 2019 (UTC)