User talk:Jmiragha/sandbox

"The Caspian Sea, Russian Kaspiyskoye More, Persian Darya-ye Khezer" - You would want to add "also known as" or something that would clarify what is "Russian Kaspiyskoye More" and "Persian Darya-ye Khezer". Abdulazizalf (talk) 15:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Grammer error in "is world's largest inland body of water". The correction would be "is the world's largest inland body of water". Abdulazizalf (talk) 15:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Since you use the word southern, you maybe should also use the word northern end instead of north: "enters at the shallow north end. Two deep basins occupy its central and southern areas." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Obrienemilyh (talk • contribs) 15:30, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

"It is bounded by Kazakhstan to the northeast"- consider revising bounded to bound as "it is" is present tense and "bounded" implies it was bound not that it is. Sgrey188 (talk) 15:45, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

"The Caspian Sea spreads out for almost 750 miles"- consider revising to "spreads out over nearly 750 miles" sounds nicer and the verb to spread should be used with "over" rather than with "for". Sgrey188 (talk) 15:50, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Waleeda2018 (talk) 15:52, 28 November 2018 (UTC) More sources will be needed.The content in the History section seems confusing, so you should try to simplify the sentences.

"The wide and endorheic Caspian Lake"- may want to maintain consistency in referring to it as the Caspian sea. Sgrey188 (talk) 15:53, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

The second paragraph of the History section is very confusing, if you can, try to simplify but graphics can also go a long way in helping your reader to understand something that seems so complicated. Sgrey188 (talk) 15:56, 28 November 2018 (UTC)