User talk:Jmjennings97/sandbox

Khulan G (talk) 15:20, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Overall your article seems concise and well organized.
 * If some pictures or images are added, it would be great.
 * Reference section should be as a recommended such as numbered.
 * Treatment options would be great if they are explained in detail or linked to other article which is written about the part.


 * Article is organized, the disease is rare so it's understood not to have that much information

Haneefav1 (talk) 03:30, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Small description of the symptoms might have better flow to the article, along with a brief list of symptoms
 * Adding a research tab might be a good idea, so people can know if there are any recent studies on the disease
 * Adding more references would deem the article more sufficient as you are getting information from multiple reliable sources

--Sweiner02 (talk) 03:38, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
 * All sections need thorough, in-text citations.
 * I'm finding a lot more symptoms than this.
 * If you are making a bulleted list, like in symptoms, use wikipedia's bullets.
 * Where is your mechanism? While we don't have all the details for this, there is information out there.
 * Missing recent research (which does exist!)
 * Use the citation manager! Are you having trouble using the wiki editor? If so, please come get help!
 * Treatment could use some more info.
 * Link any term that is important or uncommon to its own wikipedia article the first time it shows up.