User talk:Jmkuba/sandbox

Jmkuba all these choices look great, and I see you assigned 'Izanami' to yourself, which is great. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with in terms of improvements! (Also, did you finish your article review for the HIV article? It ends mid-sentence...) Gardneca (talk) 07:52, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Jmkuba it looks like you began your citation exercise but never finished it. Please complete it ASAP! Gardneca (talk) 01:48, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
I appreciate how you added citations and I can really see you've done your research with the sources listed below. I understand it can be difficult to add more content to articles that already have most of the myth laid out; maybe you can add details about how the myth came to be/how it was recorded, and if there are any places of worship to her? At the last paragraph in the Death and the Underworld section, it says "Izanami is said to have performed ritualistic cleansing, harai, after witnessing the decomposing body of his wife." Did you perhaps mean "Izanagi" instead of "Izanami"? Other than that, the draft is a good start and should be good to add more content to! Keep it up! Blue993 (talk) 10:26, 15 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Blue993 thank you for your observant and insightful review! Jmkuba, as mentioned in your peer review, you have great sources but definitely nowhere near enough additions to the Wikipedia entry. I like the last paragraph you added, but there is a lot more to add to this article. Your reviewer also mentioned that the next step is to add details about the myth, rather than just re-telling the myth altogether, and this is spot-on. You want to find scholarship about the myth, not just more versions of the myth. You've got your work cut out for you, but you have a couple weeks to work hard and continue improving your article! Gardneca (talk) 03:58, 19 April 2019 (UTC)