User talk:Jmod24/sandbox

Peer Review: Emily Rowe
Overall I think this is a great start. I think the lead section does exactly what it's supposed to do, and highlights the main points/topics of your article. I think the subsections are well organized, they just need to be expanded a little more. Maybe try to find some more references to support what you're saying. I'd try to link words in your article to their Wikipedia pages and have your subsections have capital letters throughout.