User talk:Jmoslow

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JMoslow
I thought i already had an account...? That is how i posted the article in the first place. (i use the https link because the web proxy my ISP uses has been autobanned thanks to some other subscriber... :

the Organizational Systems Security Analyst (OSSA) article
Hi - I added the context tag as I'm not familiar with the field and the article (in my opinion) currently doesnt give enough "background" to put it in context for readers outside the area. It seems like you've made a good start to the article and your most recent changes have improved it significantly. I think the article would still benefit from less jargon and more contextual information. In addition, I think it is worth asserting the notability of the subject in the article. This is best done by incorporating appropriate third party sources. See WP:CONTEXT and WP:NOTABILITY for more information. Hope this helps :) MidgleyDJ 20:29, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

JMoslow
Hi Midgley, Thanks for the input! When i was editing this, i used another wikipedia article dealing with a topic in the same category as a guide to formatting and layout: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CISSP. I thought i had gotten it similar to this format but it's either i didn't or the format i am using as an example is flawed to begin with. I will review and try to water down the jargon. If i can't get it watered down, can i explain the jargon (like some sort of terminology) as some terms may be part of the vocabulary of the category? Thanks again!

JMoslow
P.s. I've just added some additional external information sources as per your recommendation. :)