User talk:Jmtate136/sandbox

Almost all of the notes I had reading the article were addressed later in your notes! One thing I would add, however, is a brief overview of Kenyan-US relations between the establishment of the embassy and the bombing in 2007. I know there will be a section in the future, but it might be beneficial to add a brief summary in the first section - it just seems like a bit of a jump to go from 1968 to 2007. The section on US aid to Kenya is wonderfully written! The content of the article is very good so far

There are lots of good contents and research. I like the structure and the way you organize it in accordance to the timeline. Huizhi Fu — Preceding unsigned comment added by HuizhiFu98 (talk • contribs) 19:11, 15 October 2018 (UTC)