User talk:Jn1364

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Peer Review
Dear Jn1364, Your suggestion of breaking up the writing to be more organized and clear is a good suggestion, you could just be more specific in how you would exactly do that. There are a few sections that this suggestion could be applied to. Dgalls02 (talk) 03:28, 28 November 2018 (UTC)Dan/Dgalls02