User talk:JoWino

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Hey there - just to let you know, you've gotten off to a great start with your first page (much better than me with my first page!). I have changed some of the citations you've made around so that it fits in with the manual of style. Mostly, it was a simple matter of taking the correct citations that you made and then moving them up to the actual text (you can move them around to more specific areas when you feel you want to) and adding the before and after the citations, and then adding the at the end under the new "References" header I made. The full edit can be seen here, so look over it and see if you understand it all. Also, WP:CITE should be of some help. One last thing, when posting on talk pages, please sign your name by just adding four tildes ( ~ ) at the end, which will automatically add you name there. Have fun, mate! ^_^ ≈  The Haunted Angel  19:41, 3 March 2008 (UTC)